René Torenstra
Very nice, timidi. First time commenting on a song here, so I hope I don't break some unwritten rules: I liked it all, except that one point stood out for me so that I had to listen to again: at the end of the B-section the vocals end on the root ("be") while one of the lines in the turnaround there goes (V) #11, 11 (=sus), 3, thus chafing against the vocals. I do realise this is not production-related :)