Here is a new song that I have just finished writing, tracking and mixing.  I have played around with different levels for a while and checked on multiple systems (I so need Arc 2) and I think I have everything sitting about right.  Please listen if you get a chance and let me know if it is sounding balanced on your systems.  Thanks.
 
Breathe link:
 
https://soundcloud.com/michaeljhanson/breathe
 

You did a great job on this Micheal. The guitars and vocals are all very clean and well defined. Love this song.Thanks for sharing.

Mike, you just keep getting better in every way.  Your vocal on this is fun to listen to because I can hear the feeling in your voice.  The mix is clean and polished, and it conveys your message very well.  Way to go!

Starise,
Thanks for listening, bro.  Glad that you really like this song.  This one is a bit of a rewrite from many years ago.  I kept the original chord patterns, but the lyrics and chorus where completely redone.
 
Lynn,
Thank you as well.  I'm starting to get a small collection of songs that work.  Hopefully they will just keep coming.

This is great Mike! I love the lyrics, and the way you sang them. Everything sounded in its place to me, but I had to listen on my phone, so I can't really critique the mix. But going by your other songs I've heard, I'm sure this one sounds good as well! It sounded good on my phone, of that helps.

I like this song a lot Michael.  It's very catchy and the lyrics are uplifting.  The production is great, I like the guitar solo, nice vocals.  Everything is in order!  The tempo drags a little sometimes but that gives it an interesting kind of old-school vibe to it.  I like it!!

Nice, enjoyed the song a lot. Really liked the tone on the lead guitar along with the vocal.

+1 on the lead guitar tone and the lead.  I especially liked when the vocal harmony kicked in, that really amped up the energy in the song for me.  This is well mixed, well arranged, well performed.  Great job.

At the moment I am listening through a cheap set of headphones and the snare is very bright and sticks out, I'll have another listen through a better system when I can. On the flip side, everything else works really well, through said crappy headphones, so I'm assuming it'll work through anything else, and this tells me that the mix is great.
I think the song itself is a winner and I really like whatever effects you are using on the vocal, particularly the word "breathe". I guess this is the crux of the song, it works well.

nice uplifting number ... got me ready to go out for my sunday afternoon walk with the dog ...
i thought you were singing i pray for you at first .. probably cos i saw the 'christian rock' part ... is it breath for you ?
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also .. im not a musician .. so please dont be annoyed if im being silly .. but are the drums supposed to do that at 54 seconds ?  ... like they skip out of time briefly
 
still hearing it as pray for you at times .. i think those words go well too :)
 
i think i should listen to some more christian rock music .. think am ready for it now
 
God Bless x