Good job Freddy.  It's a toe tapper!

Nicely done Freddy

Freddy, this takes me back to the days of AM radio.  I enjoyed listening to this, and I think the lyrics are perfect.  I think you can help the drums by playing with the velocities of the snare and bass drum.  Often, on a snare roll, the drummer will hit the downbeat hard, but the second beat will be only half as loud, and so forth.  Otherwise, terrific tune.

Hi Bob!  Thanks for listening!  I always appreciate your feedback and comments.
 
Thanks Jimmy!  I'm glad that it got your Beatle boots tapping ;>)
 
Thanks John!  I appreciate your taking the time to comment!!
 
Hi Lynn!  Thanks for listening and I appreciate the feedback.  The drums do need help -- I am looking for some more appropriate loops but I will also try out what you are suggesting.  Thanks for the help!