Hi all,
 
Here's the first mix of a new track, 'St Mary's Clyffe' from my 'Weirdstone' project;
 
https://app.box.com/s/h6lflhsxj23ivtlljbmq
 
Once again, many thanks to Ed Kocol (Bapu) for providing bass, everything else by me.
 
Glad to get any comments and suggestions, thanks!

Me likey!  I was sort of drifting away while listening.

Fanks agin mayte for letting me loose on Juan of yer songs.

Sounds good so far James and Bapu did a nice job on the bass. Being mix #1 I'll wait to see where the next stage of this piece goes before commenting. I do, however, like the sound of the guitar so far. Everything seems to becoming along just fine.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Really liked that!  I kept waiting for "real" drums to kick in (as opposed to brushes or whatever you had laying to mellow groove down)  Maybe an occasional medium snare hit during the chorus of the first part, then when the dirty guitar comes in?  Otherwise super groovy. Awesome clean guitar tones.

hey james
great moody piece. perfect airy production as ever.
some of the bass/guitar runs seem a bit off tempo from around 2'05. again when the electric guitar comes in, the whole thing is a bit shaky timing wise.
anyhow. love the music.

Soft & Mellow, drifty but kept interest throughout with evolving instruments and melodic patterns.
 
Like sven said, personally too I wanted some hard drum hits to come out,@2:15 they are too soft I reckon.
 
Regards,
 
Cian

A nice, dreamy tune. The bass (?) is sometimes a little off beat, or is it the drums? Otherwise good job on the recording.

I've listened to a couple of your compositions James and I am very much enjoying your style. Your musical ideas are always interesting, and captivating. Look forward to more of this one.

It put me in a trance. "literally..." Took me to another place.