Neat guitar in middle, still have problems with mix, what sounds even in recording room may be unbalanced on a portable MP3 player, etc.
Remember this is a horribly short fingered guy who can't read music. Appreciate all comments, thanks CaptG
 

Brought Percussion out more and added a little reverb-they were right, it helped (12/20/13)
 https://soundcloud.com/capg/loaferrev3

 
 Does guitar come thru too strong at middle and end?
 
 

This is a nice mellow tune and sounds good, but I would bring the drums up in the mix a bit, as you can hardly hear them. I would also work on that ending, maybe a very long reverb tale. Other than that everything guitar wise sounds pretty good. I like the guitar sounds you have going on in this, very sweet sounding, yet a bit gritty. Nice tune.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Sounds Pink Floyd-ish (I like Pink Floyd). Nice, mellow, relaxing. I agree with theguitarplayer about bringing up the drums a bit. I, too, had to turn it up. 

Thanks, to turn the drums up in volume, does the rest of the sound (guitar, midi syths, etc) come down in volume? I make small adjustments to emphasize the intended main instrument, but may need to make more emphasis on the back up sections. I guess I may not have the ear for a proper mix. But I love trying to produce enjoyable sounds. I truly respect all inputs and suggestions, especially from the level of musicians on this site. I almost feel part of the crowd. Thanks again CaptG

I'm a beginner myself, so this is just a shot in the dark. Maybe somebody else can disagree or agree. I listened to it again. It sounds like the whole mix is too low to me. I'd pull the whole thing up until it's averaging about -3db. 
 
Usually, after I record everything, and get all the separate tracks tweaked the way I want them to sound, starting in the console view, I turn everything down to zero. Then I bring up the drums to the desired level, adding bass, guitars, etc, pulling each up to where they sound good to my ear in the mix. 
 

I have yet to use the console, I use the vol slider on each track. But will try it today. I have a graphic equalizer between the computer and amp which really adds to the sound, but my brother has said I need to bypass it when finalizing a song. Another problem I have is most of my songs have similar vol levels, but a couple will be lower enough to need turning up the vol for playback. Instead of relying on ear, I guess I should rely on vol meter? Dam thing moves too fast for me. Will try to solve these problems using console. If I spent as much time practicing guitar as I do trying to figure out all these programs, well anyway I don't think practice is going to help my guitar playing, bad ADD.
Also after the comment from "theguitarplayer", it made me realize most of the time I don't even consider a songs ending. Most I pick a spot and just fade out the vol, some sound like the power went out, or the whole band had a heart attack. Will have to work on this. Thanks for the comments.

Yea, too low.  But nice song, some great guitar work.
 
Unless you are going to put a graphic EQ between everybody's source of the song and their speakers, bypass it for music work.  Record a little hotter - 12 dB average (not peak).  When you get toward the end of mixing the song should be higher - even up to - 6 dB.  It is a long slog figuring this stuff out, but it ain't rocket science.  Just practise.
 
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Very nice song with great guitar tones throughout. I agree about the overall volume, but that's an easy fix when you've decided it's done.

Nice spacy vibe you've got there, but it could definitely use more drums, as others have said.  Good work!