Great job on this little gem. The vox seemed to be too up front but my iPad lies to me a lot.

Nicely done all round with this.
 
Thanks for sharing

Scottytunes
Great job on this little gem. The vox seemed to be too up front but my iPad lies to me a lot.

I think the lead is a taste hot but overall it seemed to work so I left it alone.  Thanks for the listen and nice words.

Thanks Wookie for listening.  HNY!

Hup... (for reasons described previously)

#6 online definiation of "Hup":
 
HUP!
When you throw a piece of smooshed cheese at a wall/ceiling, you must say this word.
HUP! 
(now throw the cheese, pre-smooshed)
 
I think I am not hip enough for hup.  Hip hup horray....hup 1 hup 2 hup 3...  Hup me if you can I'm feeling down... hupalong cassidy?  hup's the lady that he loves the best...

Nice...really nice.
 
I like the simplicity of this. You have a well written song. There's a lot to like about this.
 
I'd like to make 2 suggestions to you.
 
Remove one word or perhaps one line. Take out the word "sorry" and find a better word to use there. It may even be better to write a new line. Everything else in the song is so uplifting and positive,  then that one line puts you down. It's out of the character of the rest of the lyrics. Find a replacement and it will make the song so much better.
 
Second..... while I liked the Rhodes, I'd love to hear this with a nice Acoustic Grand of some make or the other. Just a personal preference there.
 
This is a seriously good song.

Hi Herb,
Thank you for taking the time with your comments.  I really appreciate it.  I liked "the sorry soul I am" to show that I am not worthy of the love even though I can't live without it.  I never thought of it until now so I will consider your suggestion seriously.
 
I will try the piano as well.  I did like the bell like quality of the keys and thought a piano would be too strong. 
 
You really brightened my day with your nice words.  Thanks much.
 
Jimmy
 
 
 

Nice one Jimmy. Very touching.
 
I'm confused though.
 
"it’s only you 
who’s always loved me 
for the sorry soul I am. "
 
"It’s just the way 
you’ve always touched me 
that made the man that I became."
 
hmm. I'll have to ponder that. 

Hey Tim,
 
Thanks for the listen.  The best I can come up with is that a great man can be humble enough to admit he is not.
 
All the best.
 
Jimmy