Well I would guess that the majority of users on this section are males between 35 - 60 years old. That may not be your target audience, but it's still a great place to get mix tips and critiques.

+1 There are a lot of helpful people here with a wealth of knowledge on Sonar and audio in general.

You are not on the wrong site Qaivon. The good with the bad you know. I thought it was well structured and it is obvious that you spent a great deal of time and effort on the production. The mix works well and the message certainly comes across as you intended. I look forward to seeing where you are with your art in the future.