this sounds like it was recorded more than just a few years ago.
it almost sounds like analog,because digital doesnt bend,it breaks.
i also have an sr 16,great drum machines,where you tapping these with your fingers?
the velocitys where verywhere.
but all in all i loved the guitar work and the vocals though drifted sometimes a little out of key sounded very good as well.
you got some stones man...big ones too.
not many people attempt such a beautified song in fear of mangling it.
you did it justification,nice work dude.