Agree with Frank. Mix isn't bad overall, just that the instruments are overwhelmed by the vox. Harmonies sound good to me.
 
Something is missing in the low end, but I can't put my finger on it from the Soundclick stream.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Bumping this as it does not deserve to be below people who only post on their own shiz...

Dan, thanks for listening and responding.  I agree with you, and I have remixed this song as of yesterday.  Hopefully, it will be more balanced now.  I cranked up the bass gtr and drum, per your suggestion.
 
Robbie, thanks for the bump!

bump worked for me! this sounds very, very cool. It has a very Bowie-ish feel to it, very edgy. Very good bass-playing, too.

Thank you, Tom, for the bump and the kind words.  I love it when someone mentions Bowie in regard to my music.  He put on one of the best shows I've ever seen in KC on his 2004 tour.  The edginess comes from the real life situation that I wrote about.  The best to you this year.

Hi Lynn, how are you? happy new year.
 
This is mental man!!! I have a concentration span of zero when it comes to other peoples music usually but this was so damn unexpected and interesting all the way through, I had to listen!
 
As Frank said the drums are a little muffled under the vocal, they could cut through a little better.
 
Well done.
 
Cian

Cian, it's good to hear from you!  HNY to you as well.  Thanks for the comments and suggestion.  This is what I'm looking for.  I will make another version of this with the drums a bit hotter, for sure.

Very nice Lynn.
Really like the lyrics, especially the chorus "Empires come and go, dreams will never die".
I'd like to hear a little more bottom on the killer bass track, and maybe some effects on the lead vocal to match the instruments.
BG vox sounded really good.
Like Freddy said, this has a very "60s" feel to it, enjoyed it a lot.
Good work!

markno999
Lynn,
 
The backing track sounds very far in the background compared to the Vox.  Cool song though.
 
Regards  

Yep +1.  Music and melodies are great,but the balance between vox and backing music not quite right. From 1.30 where the music gets louder the balance is much better,maybe automate the vox to bring levels down up to 1.30 ?
 
Love the riffs !!!!! They stay in your head :) Listening on headphones so its hard to comment about the mix,but what I hear is that the drums could do with a little more bottom end and punch ??
 
Love the break at 0.59s and backing vox work nicely.
 
Great track,just needs a bit of tweaking in the levels here or there.
 
Have a great 2014 Lynn !
 
Kev
 

Nice, high intencity vocals with many cool guitar sounds well blended together. Inspired by Pink Floyd? I really like your vocal style, fits perfectly in this genre.