I agree with theory about the sound is back the voice but in generally the song is very interesting !!

have a nice 2014

from Italy
Elix  

Hi Lynn,
 
I've listened to this one about 4 times now. It's a cool quirky song which I've come to expect from you, but something's bugging me about it. I think it's a slight timing issue - here and there the bass seems to drift away from the groove, could be just me though. Have a listen at 0:52 - 0:58 for example, see if you agree.
 
This new mix sounds much better than the first one I heard.

@ rscain - thanks for taking the time to listen and your response.  More low end on the bass is a priority on the next go-round.  I'm not sure about f/x on the vocals because I don't want to obscure the lyrics, but I've tried it that way, and it sounds cool.
 
@ Kev - I appreciate your comments, and I'm going to work on those suggestions.  Good ears.  I now realize that I really overloaded the vocals, originally.
 
@ Leizer - Wow, Pink Floyd?  What a nice thing to say.  There are so many influences in my background that I don't always know where they're coming from.  Thank you.
 
@ elix - I agree with you and everyone else about the balance between voice and instruments.  I'll work on that.  Greetings to my Italian friend!
 
@ james1213 - I just double checked that stretch, and I don't hear what you're hearing.  That really doesn't mean anything, though, and if others hear timing issues, I'll be most eager to fix them.  Since I'll be remixing this shortly, I'll put this under the microscope.  Thanks for taking the time to listen several times :)!
 
I wish that I could buy you all a round of beer.