Nice vocals and creative background music. Not sure all the hissing and static is worth while in this, but it your piece and you know what you were shooting for, so it must work for you. The vocals are really good though. Nice one.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Hey, tgp. This was my 'attempt' [?] at an atmospheric intro and outro. If that's in reference to the vocals ever, I did an additional 'whisper' vocal take on the chorus to add some sizzle. Thanks for having a listen!

Dave, this is a well crafted tune that was over before I was ready for it to be over.  The vocal and instruments shine in this.  Everything is well laid out and crystal clear.  The only thing that caught my attention was that the electronic bass drum sample sounded like it was panned a bit too far to the left, but it did not distract from the recording.  Great job!

Hey Lynn, Thanks for (repeat-)listening! I have noticed that I tend to quit cadences one or two repeat before I should, and so this song is rather short IMO. I do feel the 'leftedness' of the bass- I employed the Channel Tools plugin to stereo widen it and I suppose it has something to do with the phase. Thanks a bunch, Lynn!

This works well, I agree the atmosphere may be a bit overdone but your song your taste.
 
Thanks for sharing.