It struck me as a bit much verb on the acoustic guitar in the begining. And when that electric came in over there <--- It felt a bit too present. In the over all mix when it's all kicked in, really can't hear the drums. (I can hear the kick, but the snare "to me" seems burried) I would mix all of the drums to a drum bus. I have lots of drum buses? I have a snare bus (where I send multiple snares) I have a Tom bus, where I send the toms, a kick bus (you guessed it) I have a room and OH bus? I have a cymbals bus, I have FX buses for the drums with sends from the other buses? And ultimately I send everything to the "all drums" bus, and from their to the mains. But drums are hard... They are in fact, a "rhymes with witch." I hate the drums, to me they are the hardest thing to get right. But on this, they could be better.
This feels like it was mixed by one or more of the guitarists. The performances are excellent. No disrespect, just my unvarnished opinion. I know you won't get many constructive crits here, most will merely stop by and register their approval, Nothing wrong with that. And please keep in mind, different people will hear your stuff differently as you well know.
But also keep in mind, when more than one person hears the same thing? "Guess what?" Remember, pride goeth before the fall. Oh and "loose weight." (not you, but everyone)