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2013/11/17 14:38:07
Guitarhacker
bapu
mando and fiddle are fighting each other in the intro.
 
Other than that, sounds good Herb.




 
You mean steel and mando?   I think I may go back and pull the mando down a bit..... on the intro..... some others who have heard this said something similar about the mando parts
2013/11/17 15:55:13
jamesg1213
Well written song for the genre Herb, you've honed your craft. Agree about the mando, it's sticking out a bit. I'd maybe soften it down and pan it away from the steel.
2013/11/17 17:19:55
Rimshot
Beautiful playing and lyrics. Love the lead vocal and melody. Really nice mix.
2013/11/18 09:22:46
Guitarhacker
NEW MIX:  https://app.box.com/s/7qbvmxgrq82yxs8ld853
 
James & Rimshot, thanks.... please check the new link.... I have fixed the mando.... eliminating it totally in places and pulling it to -16db in most other places.   edited the steel in the intro a bit as well.
2013/11/23 21:17:29
Serious_Noize!
Haven't heard all the other songs in the challenge, music for me is never a contest but more an expression of feelings and the spirit.
 
Although I must say you have my vote, this sounds GREAT!! Thanks for sharing, very cool song.
 
Bobby
 
2013/11/24 07:37:41
Guitarhacker
Thanks Bobby. It wasn't a contest..... just a challenge to dust off the guitar, sharpen the pencil and write a song in a specific time frame on a topic and post the results.  So far, no one else here has posted anything to indicate they are interested in this challenge..... someone still may.
 
2013/11/24 12:05:45
cclarry
I don't celebrate the Saturnalia...but nice track!
2013/11/24 14:22:23
Freddy J
This is a most pleasant song Herb.  Great sound with a nice calming and somewhat melancholy Christmas sound.
Excellent.
2013/11/24 16:44:50
michaelhanson
Nice balanced mix Herb.  I like the Country/ Christmas feel to this song.
2013/11/25 08:16:58
Guitarhacker
CClary:  yeah.... it makes people give me a second look when I wish them a Merry Saturnalia ..... Huh? say what?
 
Freddy J :  Thanks for listening. Melancholy Christmas sound...exactly.
 
Mike:   thank you for listening.... BTW: my daughter was just down in your neck of the woods for a few days
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