Guitarhacker
Think like a producer. Make it sound as good as you can with the things/tools you have. Don't let preconceived notions of what you "think" it should sound like, cause you to get stuck in a rut and end up with something less than what you could actually make better by going on a different path. If a part of the song is hard to get sounding right, delete it or try something different there.
 

I think you are absolutely right Herb!  I went in to this with a totally preconceived notion that this song should somehow incorporate a traditional Salvation Army 4 Piece Brass Band.  And dammit, I was going to make it work!!!  Unfortunately, it didn't work despite all of my efforts.   Yes, I think the jingle bells did loosen it up a little bit but I didn't want them to go through the whole song.  That would be tedious. 
 
I just want to thank you Herb and all of those who commented for your sound advice.  This forum is really a wonderful place.  Today I listened to a fantastic "spaghetti western soundtrack"  right next to a beautifully played Christmas piece, wonderfully executed on nylon string guitar!!  
 
Thanks,
Don  
 
 

The new mix sounds better, I didn't care for the synths in the 1st version also didn't like the piano on the 1st version. I may put a little more verb on the instruments. The vocals are better on the remix as well, so all around improvement. 

Don, I like that. I think it would sound great with a rhythm guitar - would loosen it up a bit. I think your voice is really nice on this - good song - well played - I really enjoyed this. Well done my friend.