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Walt,
So far, as I'm listening, the first think I notice is the drums sound like they are on a different stage/space.
That da da da da da daaaaaa (synth or sax?) seems a bit too much (for me) then the (synth?) solo is just a tad to loud compared to the first guitar solo. Then the clean solo seems to loud compared to the first guitar solo section.
Final fade seems abrupt.
Other than those personal taste items, great piece.
Thanks for listening, and for your comments, Ed. You may be right about the drum reverb, especially considering the "inherent" reverb on the synth leads early in the song, as well as the rhodes. Maybe the drums need some more wetness to join all the other stuff.
You're probably also right about the first guitar lead being lower than the other leads. That's me being self-conscious about my guitar playing! I should probably turn it up a little, to elevate it to the level of the other leads.
The ending isn't exactly a fade... it's more that parts start dropping out until the flute, bass, and rhodes play the final note. I guess I could extend it one more set of 16 measures to let people get used to the wind-down as it's happening, rather than just wondering where all the parts went. You're right about that too. It does seem a bit rushed, and thus, confusing.
Great comments, thanks Ed. :)