Hey !
Thought I would try something a bit different :) I've gone for a contrast in the piece between fairly active then inactive slowing parts. I'm not sure if its works or not :( Have a listen ,let me know what you think,crit's welcome.The song is called Alien Island,please click the link to listen !
Kev
 

Kev, Very interesting sounds and textures. Very creative piece with a mysterious sound. Liked it!!
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Hi John
Glad the changes worked for you :) Thks for listening !
Kev

Nice sounding synths.
 
Certainly a creative piece.  The drums kinda stick out to me as not quite in the same groove with the music. But don't ask me what would make them fit properly..... maybe something more like Storm drums ...massive.
 
All said, I did actually enjoy this listen even though it's far from my normal listening fare in genre.

Guitarhacker
Nice sounding synths.
 
Certainly a creative piece.  The drums kinda stick out to me as not quite in the same groove with the music. But don't ask me what would make them fit properly..... maybe something more like Storm drums ...massive.
 
All said, I did actually enjoy this listen even though it's far from my normal listening fare in genre.

I like the drums on the quick part,but during the slow part I agree they need to gel better with the groove.
 
Glad u enjoyed the listen,appreciate you giving it a go :)
 
Kev
 

Sounds a bit Bond soundtrack-ish, especially the big strings.  It's a bit avant garde, but I like this one a lot!  I enjoy the weird rhythmic juxtapositions.

Very cool yet again Kev

Creative stuff Kev, I think I get what you were going for, there's loads of tension between the drums and the orchestral parts (very nice sounding samples btw)

Waltenstein Studios
Sounds a bit Bond soundtrack-ish, especially the big strings.  It's a bit avant garde, but I like this one a lot!  I enjoy the weird rhythmic juxtapositions.

Yep,Avant Garde,I suppose it's something like this :) But um shaken Avant Garde and not stirred !! Thks for listening
Kev
 

daryl1968
Very cool yet again Kev

Thanks,glad u liked it :)