the beat is an original but vocals were taken from an old samples cd that i bought once.
i hope will enjoy it
one last question
should i try to improve it or thrash it
thanx in advance
 
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There's not really a lot to this yet.  So far it seems like a good start.  As for it being outdated, everything old becomes new again... eventually. :)

I think you need you bring up the vocals, as the music is over powering them and I couldn't hardly understand a word. It not my genre, but If your going to do this genre make sure the vocals are a little bit over the instrumentation, so people can hear the lyrics, otherwise it will only be mush. I for one like to hear the vocals, so I can understand where the song is coming from. Nice song once you bring the vocals up.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

@Walt
thank you very much for listening and leaving feedback.
as you know i am into more retro stuff than electro.
i made this one spontaneus and don't know what it's worth.
sometimes i want more action and this is what comes out if i try to :-)
there is not much because there are no backdrops
backdrops like zap,woosh sounds etc etc.
Once again thanks.
 
@John
thank you very much
you have good ears.the vocals were really abit too low
so i pushed it abit up and opened up the highs.
i added this vocals on the fly it took me about 5 min
it was funny the vocals seems to fit into my beat without problems
although the beat were already made without them.
and it's good to hear from you that you like it.
when it comes to
"I for one like to hear the vocals, so I can understand where the song is coming from."
yep that's right but unfortunatlly there are not always Vocals to add to
and I don't want to pick up the mic again.
and my voice is not one of th best :-(
 
Once again thank you very very much Guys
 
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