You know, the problem with so many different people listening on so many different systems is that they hear things differently. I try to use my headphones on every song so I at least have a point of reference that is the same on every song. So.... I do agree that the piano was way too bright. I loved your vocal when it came in but still heard the overall brightness. When all the music was in and the keys weren't the main instrument the mix levelled out for me. I think you have a great voice and that with a few tweeks, this will be even better, expecially in the opening measures. I too welcome you to the forum. I looke forward to hearing more of your music.