Thanks for checking it out, tgp!
 
speedtom, that is AWESOME, my robot arm was one of my best mixes. I've got a lot more on the way, just gotta get back into the swing of writing lyrics, haha 8)
 
james, when you say that, I assume you're refering to difficult to hear in the mix? Unless you're referring o the actually message? XD sorry, I can't tell! But thanks a bunch! As far as bass... I have no idea. I don't have the cans to get a good feel for bass, I suppose, so I couldn't do much beyond performing it on guitar thru a bass synth and making that ALL the song's low-end.

I liked it. Sounded more like old school which is a good thing IMO. I like the positive message. I think maybe you should try the vocals one more time. The just need a little polish here and there...like where it sounds like you're running out of breath. But I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!