theguitarplayer
Nice one Walt. Has a nice funky electronica beat and looking forward to some added instrumentation and even some special effects to bring this full circle. Great start to something HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHUGH!!
Peace and Blessings, John
Thanks so much for listening John! Is there anything in particular you think this song might need? There are already 13 layers of stuff in there, and to be honest I'm actually thinking of removing one (the low filtery engine sound) to give it more space. ;)
It's true that there is no big strong lead voice blasting out "the melody" of the song. But in my mind the main "melody" is actually that Moog arpeggio that starts the song, and everything else that comes in and builds is intended as a counter melody against it, but never actually taking over. The overall sparseness is intentional, and hopefully the general funkiness of the beat makes you want to move your head from side to side, or jut your chin forward. ;) I want to make sure I don't lose that. Then again, maybe I'm the only one who thinks it's already got it? Hmm.
Or maybe this could just be a matter of personal style? Most of your songs seem to be "bigger" and more dramatic in order to underscore a philosophical/religious point you're trying to make. This piece is intended to be subtle, intellectual, fun and playful, but with no deep meaning or message.