Hi John,
This song really has a lot of complexity going on.  It has a bit of soundtrack feel to it.  I guess that this would tie into your statement above that your develop your music to what you see in your head.  That would move this song over to where you are creating art!
Excellent work!

Freddy, Thank you for listening and for the comments, they are always appreciated. It's all an art for all of us and so we keep being creative, in mind and spirit. Glad you enjoyed this piece.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

i'm just glad I don't have to explain the Caliphate...

Hi John.
Every time I go and listen to one of your songs it confuses me.
I have 2828 tracks in my Smart Sound Library (which I use for video) and can hear them throughout your compilations.
Do you play any instrument overlays on the tracks or are you just using Smart Sound tracks.
 
Using royalty free music to create an "overall piece" is novel way of creating music.
Hats off to you for creativity.
 

 John thanks for your explanation. I'm still at a loss personally to get a specific meaning from a musical piece with no lyric. I get a feeling of  disjointedness. This is what you apparently wanted to do so hats off to you on doing that! This would make a great video track. It seems as if it is qued to one already.

Robbie, You must be thinking of a caliph which deals with a caliphate. I choose not to go there, so no explaining is necessary. I'll just leave that up to you.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Gary,
Thanks for listening and for your comments, they are appreciated. Glad you have Smart Sound files as well, they are fun to use.
 
I do not play over these with instruments, or sing.
 
I do play instruments though (guitars and keyboards) and you can listen to some of my originals on my site.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Starise, Thanks for listening and sorry my video pieces cause you to get disjointedness. I hope you will be better soon. I'll have to try and save more money to get that video camera I want so I can make a video for my work, so it will all make sense. Sorry your disappointed.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Hi John.
Thanks for the reply.
I have taken a look at Your other tracks.
Good Stuff!!!

yes, I'm afraid we're in for some scary times ahead... "pharaoh gummitt take over is already in progress... wake up peoples... one day, they'll be tellin' us what beatz we can, and cannot play"..  Love the arrangement/production John... Well done