Sounds like the whole song could us a tad of chorus added to it, and a maybe just a pinch of echo on the vocals, but that's just my opinion. Nice song all around, just need a tweak here and there.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Nice tune. I love the Harmony parts and the guitar sounds great. If it were me, I would bring the percussion up a bit and the vocal down a bit. Then I would probably change my mind a few hundred times! Hahaha. I like it a lot.

Lol yeah the infamous Overthink.
Thanks
Glenn

Sweet guitar work my friend,vocals are performed well but maybe the hipass filter you're using is to a tad aggressive, just let some of the lowmids back in.

a la twisted I'd add back some low end on the chorus.  And maybe lower the 1200 boost - that is a very busy frequency, esp. w/ the guitars.  Otherwise I like how the voice breaks into the song.  It is an unexpected sound w/ this guitar centered music (or maybe I'm missing a trend).  Tends to support the theme of the piece.
 
Good listen.
 
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Glenn,
 
Cool song, really like it.   Guitar, vocals, percussion are really good.   It needs some bass though.
 
Regards