I am more into writing than producing.  That's what someone like me says when they suck at something!  My partner, CLEAN nailed it though.  Washed ou,t though it does work as is.  It could be really great with some fixes to the mix.  Some punch needs to be added.  I think it's there but not coming out yet.  I like the song.  It sounds kinda like our Phoenix bands the Pistoleros or even the Gin Blossoms.  So, that's all good.  These guys up here will help you with the mix.  They're pretty stinkin' good!  Oh, YES, I do like the song and performances.

All that needs to be said about the mix has been said above.
 
Will keep my furry ears looking for the remix.
 
Thanks for sharing.

Here is the new mix, I think I may have added some punch to the drums. I tried to add some 100-1000 Hz. Thank you so much for your comments!
 
https://soundcloud.com/travisgrotbo/go-on-now-mix-3
 
evadianepug, I showed Matt your comments and he started laughing. He wrote that song while interning at Robin Wilson's studio in Tempe. He got there and interviewed and didn't even realize who Robin was. During the interview the lead guitarist walked in. Matt recognized him because his old band used to play a bunch of Gin Blossoms songs and he recognized him from the videos. Then he realized who Robin was!

sounds good to me! again, a cool song with hit potential. now that you guys have mentioned it, I can hear some Gin Blossoms too!

I think the drums sound better now, although perhaps the bass guitar could use some more mids as well.  Definitely improving!

I finally got this to work! I can't say much because of the computer I'm listening though (here at work), but the song is good and well worth trying to fix and make better. I would trust the judgement of the others. They know what their talking about.

Thanks Walt and Clint!!

Like Clint I'm listening at work on really crappy pc speakers so I can't really judge the mix except to say it comes across pretty well on these lousy speakers so you're definately moving in the right direction.
I really like the song and all the performances sound good.
As a couple of folks have already said, you can't go wrong listening to the people around here, so keep going and good luck!

The snare's timing is not as tight as I think it should be but overall nice mix

I will try to mess with the snare timing next twisted6s, thanks!
 
I replaced the kick because of a nasty slap back thing going on. Here it is:
 
https://soundcloud.com/travisgrotbo/go-on-now-mix-4-kick-replaced