Hey,
 
This is one of mine from 2006.  I hope to remix and develop it more.
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=7236926
 
EDIT:  Here is an update:  https://soundcloud.com/donny-collins/carry-to-my-love-blessed-union
 
Here's another update as of 9-19-2013.  https://soundcloud.com/donny-collins/carry-to-my-love-blessed
 
Here's another updated as of 9-21-2013:  https://soundcloud.com/donny-collins/carry-to-my-love-blessed
 
Thanks for the listen and feedback.
 
 

what are your plans for it? just a remix or an update?
 
I'd consider re doing some of the tracks. The drums are dated sounding now. Probably state of the art on 06.
 
It will be interesting to see what you do with this.
 
I just remixed and posted a song that I had recorded some time back but basically set on it. So, yeah, get busy and rework that tune.

I would redevelop, as for a 2006 piece it sounds like a great song for working on and taking to newer levels. Not bad on its own.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

I really enjoy the song form, structure etc.
 
The piano part seems very satisfying and the vocal melody and vocal rhythmic elements seem catchy and captivating.
 
I agree that the drums could benefit by sounding more natural and dry.
 
This is a really strong song... I think you should avoid anything that sounds "effecty" and commit your self to performing the song straight up with confidence. This song can hold it's own without any need for ear candy. BTW, that's meant as a compliment!!!
 
Thanks for sharing.
 
best regards,
mike

Here's the update.
 
https://soundcloud.com/donny-collins/carry-to-my-love-blessed-union
 
 

This song has a lot going for it.  Your vocals are clear and warm sounding which is a major plus.  The arrangement is solid, as are the performances.  The updated version sounds very good on my speakers, and I think you have a winner on your hands.

Lynn
This song has a lot going for it.  Your vocals are clear and warm sounding which is a major plus.  The arrangement is solid, as are the performances.  The updated version sounds very good on my speakers, and I think you have a winner on your hands.

Hey Lynn,

Thanks very much for the listen and comments.

 Hi Donny,
 
 I liked the first mix and the second even better. I don't think there is any harm in adding some effect here and there...see what happens when you post a song? You might get two different opinions- Oh well! ;) I wouldn't make it wet but a little verb in the right places would be nice IMO.Maybe even a slight delay in the drums.
 
 The one predominant thing I noticed and I'm surprised no one else mentioned is that snare hit. To me it sounds a little too forward, almost to the point of commanding the whole mix. I would lay it back a little in the mix, maybe even eq it another place to make it a little less aggressive. 
 
 You are a really talented guy. The vocals are excellent. The song tends to give a relaxed feeling. It was a pleasant  listen.
 
 

Not my thing, however the remix translates well on my system.
 
Thanks for sharing. 

Thanks very much for the listen and feedback Star and Wookie.  I have a bad habit of making drums too loud.