How bout that!  My cousin's name is Donny Collins.  The song is very good.  I agree about the drums, though.  The update is really better IMHO.  Something about the drums still seems to bother me a bit but it could just be me, Donny.  The vocal is nicely done.

How bout that!  My cousin's name is Donny Collins.  The song is very good.  I agree about the drums, though.  The update is really better IMHO.  Something about the drums still seems to bother me a bit but it could just be me, Donny.  The vocal is nicely done.

How bout that!  My cousin's name is Donny Collins.  The song is very good.  I agree about the drums, though.  The update is really better IMHO.  Something about the drums still seems to bother me a bit but it could just be me, Donny.  The vocal is nicely done.

Hey Warren,
 
Thanks very much for the listen and feedback!
 
Donny
 

evadianepug
How bout that!  My cousin's name is Donny Collins.  The song is very good.  I agree about the drums, though.  The update is really better IMHO.  Something about the drums still seems to bother me a bit but it could just be me, Donny.  The vocal is nicely done.

Nice melody and arrangement.  I would definately use some pitch correction.  You might also work on your vocal delivery with and without vibrato.  When I hear "whispering star", I would drop the vibrato on star.  It is getting in the way of the lyric and feel.  I can hear you singing with a touch more air in your delivery and then clean up the pitch.  It may really help deliver the song.  Keep up the good work.
 
Rimshot
 

Rimshot
Nice melody and arrangement.  I would definately use some pitch correction.  You might also work on your vocal delivery with and without vibrato.  When I hear "whispering star", I would drop the vibrato on star.  It is getting in the way of the lyric and feel.  I can hear you singing with a touch more air in your delivery and then clean up the pitch.  It may really help deliver the song.  Keep up the good work.
 
Rimshot
 

Thanks for the listen and feedback.  Much appreciated!