Nice song. Cool beat and nice lyrics. The only suggestions I have are mixing the drums and bass a little higher. The vocal is a little bit too on top of the song instead of inside it. I can barely hear the drums, although the percussion is quite prominent. Overall it's a nice song.

Hi Lynn, nice song, excellent lead guitar. The beginning is a bit surprising, seems to start from nowhere. Maybe some percussion as an intro would be nice.
 
Rik

@ Boomin36Beatz - Thanks for taking the time to listen and respond.  I saw your idea of ping ponging some MIDI parts, which I liked.  I did ping pong the lead guitar at the beginning and end of this song.
 
 @ Chandler - I remixed this song, and maybe it'll be closer to your liking.  I notices those issue, too.  Good ears and good catch.
 
@ Rikki - Thanks for your kind compliments.  I don't know if the  remix is better or not, but I appreciate your comments and suggestion.  The song is as open as can be, so changes can easily be made.
 
Thank you all for your time and ideas.  This song is so new that I'm still getting a handle on it, but you all are helping me see the big picture more clearly.

The original mix is much cleaner... I do like the heavier kick in the new mix, but the overall sounds  too hot, and I'm hearing some disistortion...

Thanks, Frank.  I'll attend to that.  Good catch!

Love songs make up the vast majority of the best music ever written. I've even been known to pen one or two? But I have a few that go in the other direction too :-(
 
In the beginning                                       In the end
"Love Song"                            "Eat things and don't exist anymore*"
 
It's a cycle which thankfully has broken. That is.... "IF" you'll wear a necktie in the garden at midnight?
 
*Edited and sanitized for general consumption. 

Hey Lynn great song and production!  I like the different styles combined into one song, very cool.  The mix sounded good to me, great job!

Hi Lynn!
 
Nice song and I like your vocals. Instrumentation is quite nice. I only listened to the second mix and, I too hear distortion. It isn't in the vocals though, so I'm wondering if it is in your mix?
 
Needs a bit more low end to get that beat going! I'd like to hear the bass and kick more. Not too much more bass, but the kick is missing.
 
Regards,
Dan
 
 

@ TheBand19 - I'd prefer to wear my bolo tie.
 
@ LpMike75 - Thank you for the listen.  I appreciate your kind words.
 
@ dcumpian - I agree with you on the distortion, and I remixed this song today to compensate, I hope.  I appreciate your comments and your great ears.  The new mix can be found here:http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?q=hi&songID=12439692, or in the first post.

Edited: listened again this morning with fresh ears ...
Much better on the too-hot levels... Snare could be mixed up slightly...
Crash Cymbal seems over used (too repetitive), and is decaying too quick... blend in a couple different, good sounding crash samples, and use sparingly... Just my take... Very cool tune...