Great song there!
 
I think it has some mid range distortion but it may be just a tired me.
 
Love the song!

@ Walt and Robert, you may be right about aggressive levels in the mastering stage.  That's the difference between mastering for a wave file and an MP3.  That'll be an easy fix.

Hi dear "Lynn"
wonderful, I congratulate you I wish you continued success. Best wishes
 
regards , Grup Gezgin
 

Nice job Lynn.
I like the new vocals.

i really am fond of the chorus particularly the harmony it sticks in you head like peanut butter on the brain. nice work, Lynn.
 
this song makes me wanna take my chick on a cruise in the bahamas - very kewl!!
 
this new current mix sounds well balanced to my ears- maybe pushed a bit to limit in some places or maybe this is not normalized? anyway i like it a lot. - Daren :) 

groupgezgin
Hi dear "Lynn"
wonderful, I congratulate you I wish you continued success. Best wishes
 
regards , Grup Gezgin
 

timidi
Nice job Lynn.
I like the new vocals.

ABeautifulVirus
i really am fond of the chorus particularly the harmony it sticks in you head like peanut butter on the brain. nice work, Lynn.
 
this song makes me wanna take my chick on a cruise in the bahamas - very kewl!!
 
this new current mix sounds well balanced to my ears- maybe pushed a bit to limit in some places or maybe this is not normalized? anyway i like it a lot. - Daren :) 

 I am so pleased that this new mix is resonating with you all.  As noted above, I pushed the volume pretty hard in the mastering stage, but that will be corrected.  The rest of the mix should stay the same while ending up cleaner.  To all those who've taken so much time with me, I think it will all pay off in the end.  I'll have a good song with the help of a few dozen co-producers.

Only listening on laptop so can't say too much about mix other than it's coming across pretty well - lots going on there, but everything sits well and comes across clearly. I did hear a little distortion here and there, but as I said, laptop speakers, so make of that what you will.

Paulo, thanks for taking the time.  It's good to hear from you.  On the next mix, I'll be turning a few things down, but I'm happy to hear that I'm in the ballpark.

Hi,
 
Love the bass vibe; the way the bass seems to allow the other instruments to flow while giving a solid melodic underpin.
 
Good Job!

Hi Lynn,
 
Love the bass vibe; the way the bass allows all the other instruments to flow through while giving a solid melodic underpin.
 
Good Job!