Hi Robert, WOW,  that was very interesting in a very good way 
 
Jailene has a very easy voice to listen to ..her voice sounds natural , relaxed and not full of any bad mojo stress 
 
your backing music was very clever and inventive .... very nice , I hope the best is yet to come .
 
Kenny

Pretty voice. I agree with DC.... the music is a bit overpowering of her vocals... solve that by kicking her levels up a few db and I'd put a slight high end polish on her voice. Let it sparkle a bit.
 
Loved this quirky version.

Thanks for the kind words guys! I hope she does well also. She's back in Kentucky, even though she grew up in Mass, and hopefully she is getting ready for college!
 
Updated mix.
 
I separated the strings so they sound better. Adjusted the snare so it's less machine gun'ish. Made it a little wider and beefed up the bottom end a bit.
 
Cups (You're gonna miss me when I'm gone)