Hello again,
I had posted my song "Riverside" in earlier, unfinished forms, so just to complete the cycle, below is a link to the mastered version.  The chorus is a bit of an ode to one of my favorite vocalists, Layne Staley from Alice in Chains.  Have a listen and enjoy  :)
 
http://www.reverbnation.com/leemoran
 
 
 
Lee
 
http://open.spotify.com/album/46gwGHgsaUQgJZU3Yhboq6
 
 
 

Hi Warrenlee.  I like the style a lot.  The mix on Riverside is really bass shy.  Compare to your "Monkey" song which is almost bass heavy.  You may need to revisit your bottom end on these mixes.  
 
Rimshot
 

You have a unique sound man, keep it up!

Lee, I like the slightly manic feel of this song.  Your vocal is very expressive here.  But, as Rimshot said, the bass is nearly invisible.  If that's by choice, then OK.

Phsycodellic!! Very different vibe here for me. Keep working on it, your almost there. Different yet creative as well.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Thanks for the opinions and suggestions, VERY helpful!
 
Lee