I will try to give an honest opinion. I always do. Some "blow smoke?" You won't get smoke from me... Sometimes it's good job? Sometimes it's a critique. But it's never anything but my honest opinion. It may not be right? But it's always what I hear.

Robbie, I can appreciate that and I do!!
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Nice and dramatic and left me with a good impression.
 
Enjoyed.

jonbouy, Thanks for listening and for your comment, it is much appreciated.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Hi, John.  This is the first thing I listened to this morning, and I find it to be a good start to the day.  I don't mean to blow smoke up your arse, but even that can be medicinal.  I noticed the cymbal swell, too, because I use them from time to time.  My only advice would be to make it stand out a bit more and own it.  Other than that, I would not give a talented songwriter lessons in Composition 101.  Stay busy, my friend.

Ethereal and lovely.

Lynn, Thanks for listening and you know your comments are always important to me and well received. Also, one thing everyone needs to understand is that when making these pieces for video, I tend to over expound on things, knowing that if or when I might put this to some video, that many things in the piece can change, based on where I have to put markers throughout the piece. Because I keep all of the project files, I can take things out, add things, soften, harden, add in new instrumentation or take some out. The list is endless, but I here what you and Robbie are saying and I will keep that in mind when I make some new pieces. The pieces I have created sometimes get changed when I am mastering the mp3 file and so it is hard to keep everything tight and close as it is in the .wav file or the project file. Hope you understand where I am coming from with this explanation.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

twisted6s, Thank you for listening and your comments, they are much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed the piece.
 
Peace and Blessings, John