In a rare disagreement with Warren   I liked the first one, it seemed a little jazzier (that's a technical term right?).
 
Either way, you sound smokin'! 
 
Daryl
 

evadianepug
Yazza, right in the groove.  I think I liked the second opne best.  I'll have to listen again.  That walking upright is great.  Real or Memorex?  Is this a canned track you play to?  You really have this genre in your pocket, buddy!

Hi Warren , all the students in the course were given a choice to play over the track that fit their style / instrument best 
keyboard players generally played over the track that didn't have the keys already on it ...
I chose to play with the track that has keyboards .....it freed me up a little bit .
the players on the backing track are very good players , for the recording I did enjoy playing along with them 
Thank you for giving this a listen , I'm happy you liked a version of my playing on the playing demo  
 
Kenny 

darylcrowley
In a rare disagreement with Warren   I liked the first one, it seemed a little jazzier (that's a technical term right?).
 
Either way, you sound smokin'! 
 
Daryl
 

 
Hi Daryl ,
 
I've gotten mixed reactions every place other than the class I've posted this ...all two forums 
 
I'm with you I prefer the first one myself ...as a player ...rough spots and all 

on that version of F Blues ,  
I was aiming for progressively improvising more outside thematic melodic themes on my guitar for each passing chorus .....

the second version of F Blues I posted here and elsewhere as a courtesy .... 

I felt most listeners would probably find my second version with the "less intense style of improvised melodies" to be easier to chill out and listen to .

imho ...both approaches seem to have their pluses and minuses .

thank you for listening and commenting Daryl  

Kenny

Nice riffage. I like motif based soloing and especially ones that develop well.
 
Well done!