theguitarplayer
This is not bad at all and has a live sound to it. The lyrics are very different and quite creative, yet I still don't understand them at all. The instrumentation is good though and not a bad arrangement and mix. Nicely done.
Peace and Blessings, John
Hey John, the lyrics aren't meant to be taken exactly, they are meant to put images and ideas into the listeners head to create an experience for, in other words they aren't linear. Think "I am the walrus".
Thanks for listening, always appreciated!