Janet
I like it as is too.  :)  I think I can 'hear' it as a full-blown production too, though, so let us know when of those famous guys picks this up.  Or I'll just wait and listen on the radio.  Well done!  (I also thought the harmony was cool too.)

Jonbouy
Man you've got too much talent to be friggin' around with all that production nonsense, just keep poking 'em out like this and let someone else worry about purtying 'em all up.
 
What irks me most is not only do you excel as performer but when it comes to doing the production side you blow many of us away there too... 
 
Just a bit jealous here...