Thanks Tim, glad you liked the lyric. Coming from an ace songwriter like you that means a lot. I've made some changes to the lyrics but that line stayed, I kinda like it too, heh.
John, thanks so much. It's not really a rough mix I guess, but there are some things I want to tighten up here and there, nothing major just light housekeeping. Plus I have made some changes to the lyrics to try to make them a little more focused on the overall theme of the song. BTW, I went to your page and listened to some of your tunes, really outstanding work! You have some major chops both as a player and producer.
Frank, really appreciate the comments, glad it grooved for you. I figure if you like it I must be doing something right!