Nice work.
Is that you singing? I agree with the things mentioned above. The doubling is OK when used properly, and this is done too loudly. It should be barely audible to work right. I normally keep my doubling at -24 db or there about... solo the vocal bus and you can hear it, but, in the mix, not so much, it just adds some fattening.
The vocal phrasing and flow are awkward in quite a few places. This indicates that, from a songwriting POV, it really needs to be re-written to flow better, and easier. You try to say too much in the given time.....so rewrite it to say it better in the allotted time and phrasing.....
The blatantly silly excuse ...I pretended it was you.....quite unbelievable..... I would look at that as part of the rewrite, assuming you plan to do so...... or leave it and move on.... I tend to move on quite often. But sometimes, the rewrites are well worth the time and effort. Of course, if you have "fallen in love" with this version, a rewrite is hard to do.
The style was classic 80's country.... Micky Gilly, urban cowboy time frame..... definitely not contemporary style for today's Nashville.
Aside from all that... nitpicking...... it sounded good.