This is a new song I wrote as something you would hear in a video game soundtrack. I wrote this a few months ago, but I wasn't happy with it. After a recent sale I got Rapture pro and started digging into it. Anyway I added synths and tried to change the feel of the song? Thoughts?
 
http://soundcloud.com/cha...mself/digital-farewell

Chandler, Well, it does have a farewell feel to it, but maybe could use something else add in there around 1:20 like a short lead riff. Something that builds up and the comes back down for the final farewell. Just a suggestion for some added dynamics. Sounds good though and the mix seems a bit tight to the middle and could use added panning to the instrumentation.
 
Peace and Blessings, John