Bob - great job on this.  Nice to hear this side of you.  Your vocals and vocal processing is great as usual.  I agree with others about a bridge or something to break it up - maybe a B section.  

Hi Bob.  I like the song and your vocal.  I feel the lead vocal could use less compression.  I hear it pressing down on your dynamics too much.  The melody is very soothing.  Drums too compressed too.  The intro acoustics are really nice and it's a great start.  I could hear you sing that first verse softer.  Then, open up like you do in verse 2.  We would get to know your voice better in both deliveries.  Just my opinion.  
 
Keep up the good work Bob.  You are very talented.
 
Jimmy
 

I don't know how much my words count since I'm one of those "real amateurs"... but I liked it... Good lyrics. I have major struggles with lyrics... especially with english.... (it is not my mother-tongue)