Nice sound to the music and vocals were pretty awesome. Lead guitar could use a bit of help, but the rest of the instrumentation sound really nice. As for the video and being a first, some of the words went across the screen a bit quick and some of the photos weren't clear. I'm just trying to be honest and helpful. But, for a first it wasn't bad at all compared to others I have seen. The song part was really good. I'd keep working on it and replace some of the lead guitar and get a few new pictures in it to replace the ones that are a bit blurry. Great start on this, now make it better, because you can!
Peace and Blessings, John