It was so good, I liked it! :)
You have an excellent quality to your voice. I'd like to hear you doing some serious tunes ... who cares if you end up having to use vvocal or melodyne, everyone does now days anyway. :)
As for the tune, it was fun. Something I could listen to more than once.
The only thing that stuck out to me was, everything seemed to have a nice stereo effect to it, then the guitar lead came in, and it seemed like it was in mono and contrasted with the rest of the song. Not saying it was bad, it was a great lead, it just seemed to be in a space all it's own.
Thanks,
Bub