Tony, Sound like your getting your mixes down pretty good. Lots of different textures going on in this one, which is very creative. I can understand your desire to relate to your traditional music, but it not every ones thing to listen to, so don't worry if you don't get a lot of feedback. I find that the only one you really have to impress is yourself, and then if others enjoy it as well, then that is an added plus.
Peace and blessings, John