Well, I liked the video on the whole, most likely because it was you guys and your in the forum and I want to be nice. But, on a more professional manner of speaking I will tell the truth of the matter. That being said as to both videos, the camera mans could use a few lessons and second the mix needs some work to bring the music and vocals full circle. Being alive performance and most likely not having the best equipment you can't expect to produce a professional video production and I'm sure you are well aware of this, and so it turned out as good as it could for what you had to work with. I enjoyed this in the rough jewel for what it is. I hope you find some time to work on the music mastering of this so it will have a much fuller sound to it.
Peace and Blessings, John