Thanks sound blend! I'll try that next time.

Well, to me it does have that live bar sound to it and most likely you have done some additional editing since others have posted and my listening. Sounds like you were all having some fun and enjoying yourselves. The mix could use more attention. Robbie had the answer for a quick fix, i.e. Izotope Ozone 5 could really help your music mastering a great deal. On sale at Guitar Center until the 7th of July for $199.00 as it retails online for $249.00. Money well spent for one of the best mastering software tools you can ever own. Your song version isn't really bad, just needs some work on each track. Good Luck!
 
Peace and blessings, John

Thanks, John!! Currently I only own Sonar Plugins. I've been wanting lots of other plugins and have tried a long list of temporary trials. I can tell you my budget is pretty much exhausted at this point. It'll have to wait.
 
Make do or do without at this point.