James, this sounds very moody, and I could hear some cool vocals over this, ala Sade.  I love the dark progression and keyboard in this.  Good start!

Lynn


James, this sounds very moody, and I could hear some cool vocals over this, ala Sade.  I love the dark progression and keyboard in this.  Good start!
 
Hi Lynn , thanks buddy ! I might go back and replay my the guitar I added in here I was really too tired to be messing with it but thought what the heck try it anyway .
Hey how can I get my guitar outfront more without drowning out whats behind the music I created ?
I added some compression to my guitar track  , is there any other mixing
guitar tricks I can try experimenting around with to really make my guitar POP  ?
 
Thanks for the listen - James

Sounds good James, Sounds like a good start. Just wondering if you have any plans on writing a song with vocals in the near future? 

I know that's not your thing, and I'm kinda stuck with giving the old vocal pipes a try from time to time just to finish my songs, but you should give it some consideration. 


I really liked that song you done, Neverland where you added vocals to it, you should do more stuff like that. 

Either way, I like this, keep on rockin'!!

Bobby

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Sounds good James, Sounds like a good start. Just wondering if you have any plans on writing a song with vocals in the near future? 

I know that's not your thing, and I'm kinda stuck with giving the old vocal pipes a try from time to time just to finish my songs, but you should give it some consideration. 


I really liked that song you done, Neverland where you added vocals to it, you should do more stuff like that. 

Either way, I like this, keep on rockin'!!

Bobby

         Thanks Bobby , I like writing lyrics and singing but my problem is living
          in this apartment where the walls are thin . I thought about building a
          inexpensive singing booth but even that can cost two or three hundred
          bucks .
          This music would sound good with a womens voice in it and maybe some
          good male vocals backing her up .
         
          As for the old Neverland song , months ago I thought about redoing that
          song , maybe change some of the lyrics but you know how that goes
          when something like this comes along you end up pushing that ideal aside .
          But hey you never know , I might have to dig up the Neverland files , HELL
          I forgot I recorded that with Sonar Home Studio 7 XL I think or did I . That
          was four years back when M.J. died .
 
          Thanks for the listen - James

Sounded very good. Enjoyed the listen.

chasmcg


Sounded very good. Enjoyed the listen.

        Thanks for the listen and comment , I shortened it last night
         and now I'm working on some sort of chorus section that will
        support the verse section that you listened too .
 
         Messing around with a few ideals for my chorus  with high
         expections my ideals will sound great I'll see in a day or
         so .
 
         Thanks -James

Very moody blueish w/ the mellotron.  That sounded perfect.  What did you use?

Still needs some progression, even at only 2 minutes.  You've got a nice groove going w/ the drums and mello.  Vocals - female, would fit perfectly.    Or a lead that sticks out gently, or several of them weaving in and out.

I liked it.

AT


Very moody blueish w/ the mellotron.  That sounded perfect.  What did you use?

Still needs some progression, even at only 2 minutes.  You've got a nice groove going w/ the drums and mello.  Vocals - female, would fit perfectly.    Or a lead that sticks out gently, or several of them weaving in and out.

I liked it.
 
Thanks , the only instruments used in this thus far is GRAND PIANO , BASS GUITAR , ELECTRIC GUITAR , DRUMS , PERCUSSION SOUNDS I created , SYNTH PAD and thats pretty much it .
Right now I'm only playing four chords and plan on adding atlease three more chords in the chorus section .
If I add a bridge section maybe three more chords , thanks for the listen and comments .
I spend a few more hours setting up a chorus section and working with that , maybe by tommorrow the chorus section will be finished .
 
Thanks - James 

 

So far, this is really nice - can't wait to hear the final version.

CLEAN


So far, this is really nice - can't wait to hear the final version.
 
Thanks Mark , I been like crazy on it and right now I have two verses finished , three chorus sections finished . Still working on the bridge , sort started but I need to add something else to it .
I also might add alittle more guitar in each verse section , right now have of each verse has guitar in each one .
 

http://soundcloud.com/nightfoxmusic
I just posted what I have been working on for four days , getting close to calling it finished .
 
The bad news is yesterday one of my monitor speakers died on me . I took the one right side monitor speaker and I'm using my stereo unit to power it .
Atlease I have one monitor speaker to MIX with , better then none at all I guess . There goes another hundred dollars next month on some cheap $100.00 monitor speakers .
 
Thanks again - James