This sounds like a slide performance around which everything else was glued IMO Mark. The drums are not fitting together w/the bass as they should, I only hear that snare every Nth hit. If I were king, of the Forrest? I would take the mix, W/O the slide, or any lead, and try to glue it together better, and then put the lead over it like the icing on the cake. It's not bad? But you can do better.
Glad you're working on a new technique. And I don't mean to wee on anyone's leg, I'm just giving an honest opinion, I hope you take it that way?