Latest effort here.  Thoroughly enjoyed making this.  Let me know how the mix is...this was all on headphones.
 
https://soundcloud.com/donny-collins/song-of-juno
 

 
Nice I like the music , I can invision some other things going on in it . Sounds nice I like whats going on , well played !
 
James

Thanks for the listen and comments James.  Yes I'm looking forward to working with it some more.
 
Donny

Donny, that's a nice sounding bass you have in this piece, and it can support of weight.  The icing on this cake is like tempura-light and tasty.  Well done!

Quite an enjoyable piece thanks for sharing.

Thanks for the listen man.  I've uploaded another couple versions since the first one.
 
Thanks,
 
Donny
 

Wookiee
Quite an enjoyable piece thanks for sharing.

Very nice! Looking forward to hearing the finished version!
 
Regards,
Dan

Sounds good.... I think just a tad heavy on the bass... probably a result of the mix on the cans.   Cut it back a few db and that should solve the issue there.
 
I like to mix on cans every now and then, and when I do, and don't check it the next day on the speakers, it also tends to be a bit heavy on the bottom end.
 
I like to compare the mix on several listening variations. Usually my issues are occurring in the lower end. Mostly too much but on occasion, not enough.

It definitely picking up from what I last heard which was very listen-able.   This mix does sound much more open.
 

Great Stuff here, enjoyed listening! - Shawn