I like this song just fine, but as others have pointed out, the panning needs to be adjusted, and the drums and bass need to come up in the mix to give the song the energy it deserves.  These aren't major fixes, and the song is good enough that it deserves the extra time and polish.  I'll be listening.

All the above advice is very sound, I am listening on in my studio control room on my primary monitors but it sounds like I am listing on a mono radio.
 
Good song and the performance is sound but the mix needs some work.
 
Thanks for sharing.