I hear ya, and feel your pain... I noticed the drums drop out in a few places... I like the raw bluesy guitar...

Hmmm, I am not sure what to say about this song. There are some things working for the song, but also some things working against it. To me it sounds like the various parts do not gel, and the over-saturation of verb and grunge an attempt to remedy that lack. Lyrically, I did not find it musical or rhythmic. The mix is very muddy. On the positive side, I think you have some really cool elements, and the harmonica turned my crank. I loved that sound. I would keep that grungy sound on the piano and harmonica and clean up the rest.

The cool thing to me is that this was done on a tablet..... I did not know a tablet was accessible as a recording platform..... 

live and learn. 

Over all it ain't all bad but I am with the others regards the reverb and I can see where Shad is coming from it seems loose in places, but then again blues is lose.

Thanks for sharing

Nice bluesy sound to this one and the vocals fit the piece just right. Very nicely done and a nice production.
 
Peace and blessings, John

foxwolfen
Hmmm, I am not sure what to say about this song. There are some things working for the song, but also some things working against it. To me it sounds like the various parts do not gel, and the over-saturation of verb and grunge an attempt to remedy that lack. Lyrically, I did not find it musical or rhythmic. The mix is very muddy. On the positive side, I think you have some really cool elements, and the harmonica turned my crank. I loved that sound. I would keep that grungy sound on the piano and harmonica and clean up the rest.

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