Thanks Phil and Alkie for your awesome thoughts and validation.
Caleb (the original singer) and I don't listen to Christian or Country Music (at all) ... Ironically, this was Country ... in its original incantation. I wrote it to tribute our late Jimmyman ... trying to 'appreciate' his excellent 'Country' euphonics, etc.
But Country really isn't my thing ... and I fail singing it. Caleb lushly sung the original quite well for Alabama folk, IMHO. But, I deeply craved a seasoned retro-rock polar opposite of this ... and invited Danny to re-do the song with stronger emotives.
My songs seem to crave eternal love and salvation. And, for the rock star to remain responsible toward that: emotive, and inspired ... that was my chief concern ...
For re-clarification on the song and lyrics ... Danny stayed verbatim on my lyrics, eliminating a couple of my original lines while not adding/changing any lyrics, iirc ... and he repeated a couple verses at the end.
He delivered and performed EVERY vocal and instrument in this one! He started with sketches 1st, then delivered final performances. Some of his original guitar sketches and drums remained in the final song ... so the spontaneity was not killed by excess polish.
There were no samples outside of his fingers and vox. Necessarily, this was non-eclectic ... a lonesome one-man band! Anything eclectic would probably have lessoned the sweet lonesome invocations of this song. IMHO.
This song (just like the original) remains in the key of C ... cruising along the circle of 5ths, iirc (white keys, minor substitutions, etc.) ... but via Danny's personal invokations and inspired harmonies and counterpoints.
Interestingly, IMO, These harmonies and counterpoints could even be 'mixed' back into the original gene-pool melody ... as a vibe-hybrid and harmonization ... but the vibes would clash and things would de-volve horribly. (Hahahaha, as a physician, I myself don't believe in Darwin, but songs/genres are all 'gene pools' to me ... where songs and genres evolve and devolve ... via God, man, and/or the devil)
I'd conjecture: While this song version is almost 100% Danny, it is also almost 100% Philip's prayer, a strong percentage of God's groanings, and/or perhaps almost 100% any-lonesome-man loving his woman for so long!