Hi everyone , been working on a new version of Neverland not related to M.J. this time . The problem I'm having now is with the MIX , I'm trying to mix this with one monitor speaker . In my headphones it sounds great , in my little monitor speaker not nearly as good .
I was hoping someone who has a good set of monitor speaker can tell me if the mix is good or not so good .
Tommorrow I want to mess around with my guitar and see what I can add to this first section just to get a feel for the music using my guitar .
 
 http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12382292&q=hi&newref=1
 
Anyway this is the start of my new song project , still have a long ways to go as I plan on adding new lyrics to it as well after the music is finished .
Thanks for the listen and any comment or suggestions - James

Ahhh, WIP? It was a WIP in 2009? This is 2013? That is by definition "4 years later?" And the quote unquote "final" version is from 2009? 
 
I don't get it? I could post 20 songs of mine from years ago, in an effort to remain on the 1st page? But I don't? Mayby you shouldn't either?
 
I don't doubt that people will answer, and comment? They should not... It's noise on a forum that should be used for legitimate music? And something from 4 years ago, without commenting that it's from 4 years ago? Is by definition "noise..." Preventing real/current music on the forum. 
 
I'm confident you will have an agressive, abusive attack in response? (history) Please note, my post is neither, it deals in facts? Something I'm sure your reply will not risk...
 
**PLEASE NOTE!!** IT IS BY DEFINITION IMPOSSIBLE TO HAVE ALL OF YOUR WORK CONSIDERED A WORK IN PROGRESS. And in-particular, something from 4 years ago... If so, then "everything" is a work in progress? Nothing is done?  Nothing is a completed work? And nothing should be judged on its merits? "Absolutely Nothing..." Because it's all fluid? And not the kind you want squirted on you either...
 
Are there no represntations made here with regard to what has changed, modified, or improved from 2009? I looked? I don't believe this is an effort to improve anything? (sorry just observation) Seems more a reguritation than a resubmission? I could be wrong, just didn't see anything to indicate otherwiise.

THE FINAL NEVERLAND - VOCALS

  
  
DON'T  SAY IT !   I just had to redo the vocal in Neverland but theres a BIG SURPRISE this time , oh yes you will just have to give it a listen just one last time . 
  
This is my very best vocal track ever , I hope you will agree . 
  
CLICK  - NEVERLAND  to hear the real Neverland the way it was meant to sound like.  
   
REOPEN -http://www.soundclick.com...1127&content=music
   
  
Cheers! 
 post edited by nightriderXL - August 05, 09 2:11 PM
 
*Also, please note, there seemed to be some sort of a cry for help based on crippled equipment? This is also part of the pattern...
 
I can give you help? Based on your broken equipment?
 
Are you ready to hear it? Because words like "Suck" and "Ass" come up throughout my reviews on this "stuff?" They are fair, and real expressions?
 
But Cheers!

Damn my memory. It either is? Or "is not" a Work In Progress... We all fight with those, so to BS it as such disrespects others who in fact do struggle with work of progress.

 
YOUR A SICK INDIVDUAL ROBBY ! Go get the help you need , your words are completely WORTHLESS !
How many beers did you have tonight , STAY OUT OF MY POST or I will report you !!!
I was posting this for feedback on my MIX you DUMMY ! You should be banned from using this forum PERIOD , you don't belong here ROBBY ! 
 
You lucky I don't control this forum or else you would be BANNED for your RATTING and foul mouth .
 
GO GET HELP ROBBY , DO IT NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pay no attention to this person acting like a Troll James. You made it clear that you are RE-DOING your song. In fact I am the one who suggested that you should do so.
 
There's always going to be somebody who just doesn't want you to be heard because of their ego's, pay no attention to them. Keep on working on it James.
 
This song was completed and FINISHED 100% WITH A VIDEO 100% also, I am the one who suggested you should re-do it and re-visit your song now 4 years later.
 
There is nothing wrong with posting something you are working on looking for advice, UH, last time I checked this was the SONGS forum and that's kinda the whole point. Getting advice, learning, making friends. As for the thrashing, let that be someone else's problem, don't let it discourage you and I'd suggest just ignoring such things.
 
Keep working on this one James, I would really like to see you do the video version and enjoyed hearing what you've done with the music so far also. It is sounding better than I remember.
 
Keep on keeping on James,
 
Bobby
 

Thanks Bobby , your right there isn't ONE forum rule here saying you can't post a WIP song . Robby MISSED my reason for posting it , his PERSONAL ATTACKS toward me shows what type of person he really is in real life and its almost certain his actions toward others will rub off on those who live with him and thats SAD !
Someday he will understand what the word BULLY means , people like that really need professional medical help and its too bad we have to live around these types of people who think their better then others who are using this forum for help and advice . Maybe someday he will stop drinking and realize this is a forum is for everyone who has purchased and uses CakeWalk products and who is here to learn from others who are kind enough to HELP others when asked .
 
Thanks again Bobby - James

 
Just made a few chord changes in my first verse , going to try adding some lead guitar to it today and see how it sounds .
 
Thanks for the feedback on the MIX - James

Mix sounds pretty good to me. The low bass beat is a tad heavy, IMO.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Interesting tune - enjoyed it.

dcumpian
Mix sounds pretty good to me. The low bass beat is a tad heavy, IMO.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Thanks Dan , yea I sort added alot of Bass and maybe a tab too much .