dcumpian
Mix sounds pretty good to me. The low bass beat is a tad heavy, IMO.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Thanks Dan , yea I sort added alot of Bass and maybe a tab too much .

CLEAN
Interesting tune - enjoyed it.

Thanks Mark , I been working about three hours today on some guitar for this song and I almost have it worked out so it works with the new lyrics I started writing for this new version of NEVERLAND .
This time I plan on leaving the late M.J. out of it , I'm rewriting the whole song in a different way then before .
Still alot of ground work to do , there won't be anymore updates untill its completely finished so that should make Robby HAPPY !
 
Thanks for the listen Mark -James
 

 
Ok one more time , a comment was made that I had too much bass going on so topday I went back in and replayed my piano section for my first verse because of the lyrics I'm writing plus I remixed it hoping to remove some of the bassy sound going on .
I think I did that but you be the judge , too much bass going on now ?
 
Thanks -James

Been working on my first verse for a few hours , I replayed everything so what your thoughts on this new piano section ?
Next up is some sort Chorus section , hope you enjoyed it so far - James

 
Gee my piano BONEYARD keeps growing , replayed how many times till the sweet bitter end ! LOL
Wasn't happy with the fourth round so I tried a different approach , think its a keeper for this first section now I hope .
 
Cheers - James

 Sounded nice at this end!

Starise
 Sounded nice at this end!

Hi Starise , thanks buddy ! Its only the first verse section , next is a small four or six measure break before the Chorus section , thinking maybe some violin in the break section just before the Chorus .
 
Thanks - James

Better!
 
Regards,
Dan

dcumpian
Better!
 
Regards,
Dan

Thanks still working on making it sound better before I move forward , perfection is what I'm aiming for .
Cheers -James

With this updated version I added lead guitar to the first verse , hope you like it !
 
James