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2013/06/19 00:45:21
THE NIGHT FOX
dcumpian
Mix sounds pretty good to me. The low bass beat is a tad heavy, IMO.
 
Regards,
Dan
 


Thanks Dan , yea I sort added alot of Bass and maybe a tab too much .
2013/06/19 00:52:12
THE NIGHT FOX
CLEAN
Interesting tune - enjoyed it.


Thanks Mark , I been working about three hours today on some guitar for this song and I almost have it worked out so it works with the new lyrics I started writing for this new version of NEVERLAND .
This time I plan on leaving the late M.J. out of it , I'm rewriting the whole song in a different way then before .
Still alot of ground work to do , there won't be anymore updates untill its completely finished so that should make Robby HAPPY !
 
Thanks for the listen Mark -James
 
2013/06/19 11:01:02
THE NIGHT FOX
 
Ok one more time , a comment was made that I had too much bass going on so topday I went back in and replayed my piano section for my first verse because of the lyrics I'm writing plus I remixed it hoping to remove some of the bassy sound going on .
I think I did that but you be the judge , too much bass going on now ?
 
Thanks -James
2013/06/20 00:45:01
THE NIGHT FOX
Been working on my first verse for a few hours , I replayed everything so what your thoughts on this new piano section ?
Next up is some sort Chorus section , hope you enjoyed it so far - James
2013/06/20 14:33:41
THE NIGHT FOX
 
Gee my piano BONEYARD keeps growing , replayed how many times till the sweet bitter end ! LOL
Wasn't happy with the fourth round so I tried a different approach , think its a keeper for this first section now I hope .
 
Cheers - James
2013/06/20 14:34:11
Starise
 Sounded nice at this end!
2013/06/20 14:39:15
THE NIGHT FOX
Starise
 Sounded nice at this end!


Hi Starise , thanks buddy ! Its only the first verse section , next is a small four or six measure break before the Chorus section , thinking maybe some violin in the break section just before the Chorus .
 
Thanks - James
2013/06/20 20:19:07
dcumpian
Better!
 
Regards,
Dan
2013/06/20 21:34:25
THE NIGHT FOX
dcumpian
Better!
 
Regards,
Dan


Thanks still working on making it sound better before I move forward , perfection is what I'm aiming for .
Cheers -James
2013/06/21 00:36:16
THE NIGHT FOX
With this updated version I added lead guitar to the first verse , hope you like it !
 
James
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